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Wednesday 19 August 2009

Smoken

Curling through the air,
weaving threads, of
delicate existence,
the haze wisps,
towards the sun
and
a pale shadow
trails.



Shamanth,
18th august, 2009.

3 comments:

  1. this sounds like some really evil shadow (the haze, ur name of the devil) going up in the air after a defeat , moving towards the sun, leaving all his cruelty and wickedness behind:)

    p.s. i think i shouldnt read fantasy books any more:P
    i loved it if my interpretation goes with u:D
    i cant think what u thot of while writing this..is it "only smoke" or some other aspect of it?

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  2. 'weaving threads of delicate existance' wow.

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  3. @manisha - As always, I love your interpretations :)

    @mikimbizi - thanks :) th funny part is, i had almost thought of removing that line, but then didnt :) glad u liked it :)

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